All Comments on 'Ms. Croft Ch. 02'

This chapter had it all. You really know how to describe sexual positions...and cum-shots. You've created Lara Croft into so much more than a video game character with big tits. You've given her some edge. I think this story will be one I come back to again and again.

A very high quality story. I liked it even more than the first chapter. There's so many little details that really make it shine. I'd love to see Lara explore her submissive side even more in a next chapter. I just hope we won't have to wait another three months for it ;) Again, thank you, brilliant work!

A few minor spelling errors, and even a couple of words I had to look up. But the descriptions of feelings and Lara's character as a true lady and a slut in the bedroom are VERY HOT!<br>

Do go on, please!<br><br>

The empty manor implied some kind of thriller plot in following chapters. While I'm not against plot in erotica, in fact I would appreciate it, please make sure it's good. Don't let the villain burst in and take Lara hostage with the main character heroically rescuing her. That's too easy.<br><br>

Stay classy,<br><br>

cryforhelp

Highly Erotic and, generally very well written. Am watching for the next one!

My favourite series on Literotica - please don't keep us (and Lara) waiting too long for the next one!

Wonderful story - please write more!