All Comments on 'Mum! You Whore 06'

I really enjoy how you write Fiona and especially the way you're kind of walking the tightrope of consent with her. She's made to act in a certain way but you write in enough pointers here and there to show she actually enjoys it all, not matter how sordid and dominantly the men using her are.

I would like to see more of what has been going on between Alice and Nigel Mann though, that's an interesting angle too but so far you've revealed only hints and snapshots of that scenario.

Really enjoying this story.

Nickamano