All Comments on 'My 19th Birthday Present'

Very much enjoyed your story, your style has a keen sense of the moment and your not quite so... innocence.

Now I've got to read the others. Thank you for sharing.

I liked it ;)

For me ;)

Good one. Keep 'em coming.

And them some!

@anonymous

You didn't like it then...?

;)

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it needs some more detail and more to the story tell us what happened on the ride home

It was a little short, but I thought it was erotic. Perhaps a few more details would have made it better. I'm sure we can all use our imagination about what happened on the ride back to the baby sitter's home.