by LilacWine
You write well and very descriptively. I felt as if I were outside your window peering in. Keep up the hot story writing
Oh my gosh! What a story. Had me hot and going until, like your heroine I couldn't stop cumming!
First time I've read one of your stories. I'm going back for the rest of them.
Thanks for the pleasure of pleasure!
Excellent writing, good story. How could anyone ask for more?
What a story !! It was so good I felt I was in my bed room with the window open mastubating for all to see. It was such a turn on. I better go find my vibrator to finish off
Lilac this is a beautiful well written story. I hope you don't mind me saying it is a quantum leap over your early work not that I haven't enjoyed that as you know. It gave a real insight into how the physical and mental elements of your character came together to well....cum LOL
Stories that are able to capture the mental and physical side of intimacy are magic and a cut above the rest! Well done Keep writing! Nigel
Oh Lilac WOW !!! - I don't think that Iv ever read something so erotic and sensual in my entire life before.
What a wonderful sexy and beautiful description of self pleasure that you paint.
My God it made me feel so very horny wishing and dreaming that I could be perhaps be that very person that you are thinking about here.
Bloody Fantastic, Keep up the great work.
xxB
Newtown, NSW, Australia
Female readers apparently enjoyed this tale judging by the comments. Well this "dirty old man" also thought it was great. Would have loved to have been Chris but would not have been content to only watch.
Keep up the good work.
Excellent! I rarely leave public salutations but this is a perfect description of a woman masturbating to her fantasy and in doing so allowing herself to be watched by a large appreciative audience. ENCORE! Chris isn't the only 'older' man aroused by your pleasure.
Best story of the week! I wanted to be Chris the neighbor in your story and take in all of you!!