All Comments on 'My Arousal: A Note'

by whimsicalrelaxed

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story,

I always wonder if women actually have such thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
enjoyed your story

Welcome to the world of Authors. I enjoyed your story and hope you continue writing. wendy

willy9ishwilly9ishover 16 years ago
lekker

Enjoyed reading this very much do write more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
well written

very well written, sexy and cuts off just at the right time leaving the rest to the imagination... well done for your first attempt... Keep writing.

Trapper ak BobbyTrapper ak Bobbyover 16 years ago
I enjoyed this.

I enjoyed your short story. You kept it realistic and erotic. Its a good job of teasing and you left the rest to the imagination. nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
yum

That was hot and delicious and well written too. Can't wait for your next one.

BeckmanBeckmanover 16 years ago
Loved it

Great story. I loved the interplay between what you were fantasizing, what you were actually doing to yourself and the monologue directed toward the subject of your letter. Your story has a wonderful depth and is far from the cliche. I'm looking forward for more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
WOW!

Very sensual and the image of you masturbating...well, let's just say I had to do that myself!

Maybe one day I'll tell you who this is.

*w*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
yay!

Both are great, girl! Love both of your stories. <P>vocal girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
steamy....

....throbbing here...ty!

ericahopeericahopeover 12 years ago
Lovely...

Mmmm...how erotic sweetie :) I'm so glad I finally got around to reading one of your stories. I'll have to check out the other one now!

Erica :)

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