by jennysmith17
Nice amount of description and good narrative flow. The transition from watcher to participant is very fast, some dialogue and emotional content would have added some extra excitement to the scene. The Mom is a bit of a cipher and I hope that she gets some more personality as we move along, and the same goes for the friends. Narrative flow, descriptions, and emotional verisimilitude make for a good story, and with a little more details this could be even better. As it is it's a sexy story. Thanks for writing!
he should have done something if not at least get his laptop back then plan his revenge!!!
But when it turned to him being forced to expose his mother to his friends, it ruined the story for me.
I kept expecting him to protect his mother, but it didn't happen.
He turned into a little wimp, and let his mommy handle it.
With a better ending, I think this would be a great story.
Hopefully the next chapter will redeem the little wimp, and he'll be man enough to protect his mom.
Thanks for the read.
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Your story is so hot. The best part is at the end where mom is made to swallow her creampie. Just that alone is worth 5 stars. Yummy.
Wow, a very naughty sexy story. I'm sure every mom would love a cum bath from her horny son and his friends. Gave it a 5 Scott