All Comments on 'My Bare Adventure'

Isn't being naked illegal?

If being naked is illegal, then we were all born illegally.

Public nudity might be another matter. As I understand it, in the UK at least, being naked is not illegal unless it causes offense to others!

you could of told us your sex at least.

it reminded me of my first forays into 'nude runs'.

Definitely well written. I am guessing you deliberately omitted the sex of the character so that anyone reading it could substitute themselves in his/her place. A gamble in that some reading this might have wanted to visualize the scenes with the opposite sex as the main character. But very good job anyway.

4 stars.

Alaska may be sparsely populated, and you can go 'naked hiking' in the summer in a lot of places. However, in a town, in the winter, it's a lot more exciting (though of shorter duration due to the cold), even if you're alone. It's even more fun if you take a friend of the opposite gender along. Maybe I should write about that some day.

Thanks for the feedback guys and girls. I have more stories which I will post in future, probably with more effort on the storytelling part, as this story was just a copy of a confession post to another site, and as such wasn't all it could be. But I thought it was worth posting anyway, and I'm pleased to hear that many of you agree.

And yes, the omission of gender was deliberate. It lets everyone imagine the protagonist however they like, and I think it works well enough in this instance.

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you have to keep writing

Nice story, very exciting, but you neglected to mention whether you are a man or a woman. Did your adventure get you hard, or get you wet? It does make a difference when reading the story.