by iabcpae
Nice job, keep it up and we won't have any trouble keeping it up either!
Great how all three are enjoying each other. Please post a second part.
I like the way you told your story and enjoyed the details you presented. I love the subject matter as well! However- there were numerous mis-spellings and a few errors that a good editor might catch and correct for you. I'd suggest finding someone to read and tweak your work before posting.. otherwise.. nicely done. Thanks for sharing.