by mondotoken
You are a very talented writer with very good attention to detail. The way you tell it makes me picture this as an actual movie. I loved the first two chapters because it involved Etta which i was waiting to read more of since chapter 1. But personally i dont care much for how her character ended up and steadly being forgotten. But this is just me. I am a simple BBW/MILF lover lol. Keep writing please.
Thing whole story had meaning and wasn't just about all sex . Please Please Please!!! Continue this .
Great story! Amazing talent. I am hooked. I need to know what happens afterwards and the back story of the families' situation and if he reconciles with both of them? Please write more it's sooooo good! SsbbwLover77.
Please continue this series I absolutely loved it!
This is a great story and if you could I would be much obliged if you continued, it seems like more is still unfolding
Ok, please finish this! Gotta know who he ends up with, if he fixes it with Tina or both of them!