All Comments on 'My Blood'

hope you have more and soon

Their referring to each other as Brother and Sister is a little strange. The whole thing seems to have a regimented, ritualistic feel.

I can see your point, mafia, but I feel that it is much hotter when they say it to each other like they do. I dunno, stylistic preference I guess. Fantasies are ritualistic, when you think about it. All the parts need to be there or it doesn't work, no?

The pedantic reference of 'Brother' and 'Sister' was a put off for me. We know it's incest and constant 'in your face' of sibling references just spoils the whole story.

Great description of how it truly is the best experience...

I actually found the repeated use of "Brother," and "Sister" to make it more erotic. As much as the sex itself was hot, the reminder that it was his sister, and it was her brother, pushed it to a higher level. It's the breaking, the shattering of that wall of "not right" that made this an especially great read for me. Now, time to see what else you've written...

Just...wow.

Awesome build up, stunning surprises, tension, conflict, love, lust...

What more could you want?

Thank you!

-alextasy