All Comments on 'My Closest Kin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
That's close!

Whew! Almost made me cum, reading it!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very good

I like this story but it is so sad. I think that she should leave him and he finds out how much he really needs her. this relly needs another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Beautiful story

Cousin-fucking is much more common than some people think. Your story was beautifully written. It gave me something to masturbate to. It felt great when I orgasmed. Thank you for the fun.

SmallwandaSmallwandaabout 16 years ago
Well done.

A nicely crafted story I like that you are able to give both characters depth in a few very short lines. I wish I had that ablity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Yummy.

Very hot.

bunny_earsbunny_earsabout 13 years ago

i hope there is as sequel to this, it seems there is definatley a story to tell!

B xxx

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Well! It's been 6 years, but in the midst of procrastinating on working on the manuscript for an actual novel (gasp!), I started looking over some of my old work and found the partially-finished stories I'd put up here. Cue the resulting guilt and urge to get the ball rolling ...