by Irish Moss
you need to pay better attention to what you write. when they were in the 69 position you said he came in her mouth THAT ISN'T POSSIBLE SINCE HE WAS WEARING A CONDOM AND YOU DIDN'T HAVE HER REMOVE IT. little errors like that really ruin a good story
if you don't want to be attacked either WRITE BETTER STORIES AND USE A GOOD EDITOR or STOP WRITING. readers hate writers that put unrealistic crap in the story or don't finish them or just plain can't write well enough to pass a grade school exam. you need to delete all stories and have a GOOD WRITIER rewrite them and you need to go back to grade school and finish this time THEN AND ONLY THEN WILL YOUR STORIES BE WORTH TRYING TO READ.
she needs to be on birth control so he can fill her pussy with hot man seed.