All Comments on 'My Dad's Birthday'

I love your writing style. Its to the point, yet descriptive in ways I easily understand, and can connect with.

The variety and abundance of lovers was broad sweeping, and explosive.

I'll look forward to more by Scorpio44

the first encounter--Two made the whole tale somewhat unbelievable

I liked the story. Unlike the other comment, I liked the first encounter because it gave an insight into his dad's new life. I did find a small disconnect in the story with the mother visiting the dad's place in the middle of the night...but you did write that they were "still friends"! Still not enough to take away from the whole story.

There is always someone who can surprise you at anytime. I think Mom gave him what he really needed.

Hot stuff! I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

As far as the actual writing goes, you are one of the best writers here. I have not noticed any errors on the two of your stories that I have read so far - and I'm a critical bastard. The only improvement that I would suggest would be to include the name of the person speaking now and then in your quotations - sometimes it is hard to tell.

I <i>loved</i> this story! Far different from your others and once again, as in your stories about "Not A Choice" - You've handled the taboo about incest with style and grace. You've taken it from 'dirty and tawdry'... to 'gentle and loving'... and gave his mother back the feelings that she'd had when her son was an infant and breast feeding... making the re-connection one of sweetness with a sense of poinancy. Thank you for a story well written.

I was glad Jack Jr. dumped Kelly the player in the manner he did.

<i>"I would have liked it better if you had left out the first encounter--Two made the whole tale somewhat unbelievable."</i><br>

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Then you <u>obviously</u> have <i>not</i> either read this authors comments on his profile page... nor believe that two such encounters, on two separate nights, being possible. I find it perfectly believable - and - plausible!<br>

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Once again Scorpio... BRAVO on a story well-written!

I liked it, but I was curious as to the real reason his parents broke up. You kinda hinted at it during the beginning and when Mom came over in the middle of the night I thought they would have the talk. Something is going on between mom and dad for her to come over to give him a birthday blow. It would have been nice to know what it was!

As I have said so many times before "A well thought out tale written by a true master of his craft! Perfect in every way – any further comments would be superfluous!" Pete.

Fantastic SEX, great LOVE story!

GREAT SEX is dressed up in deep affection in this fine, well crafted, oddly romantic story. Second reading deepens the thoughts: Could a young man really have SUPER sex with both his father's girlfriend and his own mother -- and be profoundly fond of both while still respecting his father's birthday? Or is it all just a splendid wet dream? I'm giving up housesitting for Lent.

I never had an experience like this with my biological mother I was raised by my great grandparents, and with the exception of showers when i was really young or taking care of them when they were bed ridden and close to death I never saw them naked, they didn't even sleep in the same bed. I am not sure they ever had sex after my grandfather their only child was born. Though not for a lack of my great grandfather being interested as I found out when i was living with him a few years after she had passed away. He had several girlfriends at that time it really turned out to be a jealous mess eventually and when we left that little town we were living in and came back to Texas I think that's when he died on the inside. It really is a miracle I turned out to be somewhat normal. It has taken 30+ years but I do have a relationship similar to this now and I wouldn't change it

Your stories are a hit and miss proposition for me. Even more , i often dislike Your biting comments on stories i deem to be quality . Well this was a bases loaded double at the very least. Thank u for sharing.

Interesting way to get yourself routed down the wrong road lol -

A fun trip ahead it seems -

mindless - boring - tasteless