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moterhead74moterhead74over 16 years ago
Great story!!

I just finished reading all 3 chapters, and it was hot. From the boots to the anal to the girl/girl, I loved it all!!. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wooden

Nice ideas, but the dialogue was a little wooden. Also far too short.

Lots of potential. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. :)

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