All Comments on 'My Dream of You'

This is me. A story that I want so much in my life to have a man come to me as I kept reading dreaming that was me and not her. I sat here and my mind raced with the excite and pleasure as I kept reading. Oh you are so great. I want to read more. I want this experience to happen.

Oh a honey brown skin woman so full of passion.Bring that man to me in my dreams.

excellent piece, fi. you've raised the bar there.

the first person POV isn't everyone's cup of tea. i hope this one does well and you get loadsa feedback. luvs ya. xx

This is just beautiful. The passion is palpable in your writing. The last line hits hard, though...

I too was somewhat taken aback by the ending. Fiona, you are a gifted writer!

Fantastic and descriptive language elevates this work. I like the ending. The juxtaposition of sweet dreams and bitter reality works beautifully.