by FDrake
Good story! Don't mind the mean comments. Well written and very erotic. Just maybe it needed a little more build-up, it's all a little too sudden.
Your writing isn't bad but the story reads as though a young teenage boy came up with the plot. Even girls in conservative families learn about themselves.
I laughed when she 'finally understood' what her measurements meant. Then I stopped when you wrote that her nipples were larger than the palms of her hands.
If you are a teenager, keep at it but be realistic. If not, I don't know what to tell you.