All Comments on 'My Education'

by FDrake

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Total fucking crap

Rubbish

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

Good story! Don't mind the mean comments. Well written and very erotic. Just maybe it needed a little more build-up, it's all a little too sudden.

ttom76ttom76over 10 years ago
Stupid

Your writing isn't bad but the story reads as though a young teenage boy came up with the plot. Even girls in conservative families learn about themselves.

I laughed when she 'finally understood' what her measurements meant. Then I stopped when you wrote that her nipples were larger than the palms of her hands.

If you are a teenager, keep at it but be realistic. If not, I don't know what to tell you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Dull

Bit dull to be honest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
dull!!! Sounds like your mariage dear annony!!

gave it a 5

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