All Comments on 'My Fair Slut Ch. 06'

I'm all for Jim to come out on top. After all, Paul has enjoyed the position of power for a long time. Ii's time for him to be the slave.

Keep up the good work! I keep coming back for more.

IVe read in a long time dude, keep up the Paul vs Jim saga... i'd love to see Jim turn the tables and see some really nasty shit happen to Paul :)

I can't stop fingering myself to these stories! They're fantastic!

I'm Loving this story line... ITS HOT and I can't wait to get to the next chapter... but like you said.. it only takes us a few minutes to give you some feed back... KEEP up the good work and thank you for doing such a GREAT JOB!!!!

I hope Jim wins.

love your stories think paul needs to get a taste of his own medicine GO JIM

great stuff , keep going ,, the mind is key to all relationships ,, evel grin ,, learning control is power of life

The hyno doc is great. Can not wait to read Jim's revenge.

Great hot well written original series. Think about expanding it to a mainsteam novel.

i wish there was more, i see nothing has been written for awhile, i am dreading getting to the end. i want it to go on and on..

I've really, really enjoyed your story. Sitting in a puddle for most of it. Now that you've given Jim the upper hand, please follow through with it. I'd love to see Paul get a taste of his own medicine. He's gotten away with it for so many years, it's time for a little payback. It would be great to see him made the sissy for all the whores in the office and have his boy cunt used by the big cocks. You could always bring him back to himself afterward.....or leave him with the split personality for his wife.

Bloody brilliant only wished you could type faster keep it going i'll be back time and time again....I personally think the nicer ending would be jim take over slowly returning his colleges relationships to somewhat normal and take a fittness dvd to market and the encounters thereafter....Once again great great writing

Very good! Please make it more accessible to people who haven't read the other stories in the series. Loved it though!

Jim should take over. Paul is a bastard. Great story.

I have been an avid reader of erotica for years, I enjoy a wide range of stories. This has to be in the top 10 of my favorite series. I have enjoyed the twist and turns along the way and cannot wait for the next chapter.... Awesome story.

These stories are so hot, and I know its been ages since you wrote them, but why did you stop? You have such a talent for this writing, if you needed a pick me up from a reader. Here it is, this is my second round reading this set of stories and I still absolutely love them, they turn me into a wet puddle of need.

Great writing, your writing would be outstanding

and superlative with proofreading. I strongly

believe most writers here do not understand

how much better a story is critiqued and

appreciated with proper spelling and punctuation.

That being said, Paul is an ideal villain, and I think it

would be a great coup for you to let him turn the

tables on everyone and start a international sex

slave business!!

Thanks for the fantastic read !!

This is such a good series I can't wait to get to the next chapter. You have a great story line in the works and readers on the hook. Please keep them cumming.

Tim

great story, keep it up

a very addictive read!

This story has so many twists and turns. Sobmuch back story, it very interesting. I have read many of the mind control stories and this has been the most interesting so far. Keep up the good work!!!!!!

loved seeing Kathy lost to Shaun

Just wablnted to say that my cock is always hard reading your stories,

So just keep writing, period.

Looking forward to reading more

Jim must take all that is Paul's his women his business every thing

i just love it .each chapter .

I'm loving these stories, thank you so much, don't change a thing x