by Boratus
WET, WET, WET Those are the words I would use to describe my reaction to this story! Excellent as always Boratus
Though it started strong, I thought it got a little slow in the middle, and was very dissapointed by the lack of a true power strugle and/or the lack of detal in the confrentation between the two alpha males. I hope the next contains more of this kind of struggle. But still an enjoyable read... good work!
I have loved the story so far and I cant wait for more! PLEASE finish it!!!
When can we expect the next chapter. I loved this story so far, when is the end comming???????
Hey I don't give a shit about her fucking backstorydont waste my time. Theres only a few paragraphs I needed they were last.
I absolutely love the backstory and the different perspectives it make it a more three dimensional story, Fantastic work I can't wait for the last chapter.