by MrLangrove
This was a very relatable story and it was well written. All in all I would say it was pretty hot, and I hope to read further stories about Zach and ....... (you never said what Zach's boyfriends name was)
I really like your style... sweet, sensuous, understated and, from my experience, very real.
I agree with the other 2 comments. 5 stars from me. Hope you will be writing more about these 2.
Love that these were two average men, not hyper-macho. Could we please read about them in a side-by-side 69, taking turns sucking and watching being sucked?
Why was it called 'My First Blowjob Experience' when the narrator wrote, -I had sucked a cock before-. I was expecting to read it as a new experience with all the reluctance and experimentation and uncertainty.