All Comments on 'My First Couple'

I loved the story and the descriptions of the action. It could use a little more detailed proof reading.

Loved the story, especially the pace. Sounds very real to me, as I have had a similar experience. A great read!

I wish I was that woman. Very hot.

I loved how you described your cock entering Lesley. Amazing turn on! Sequel?

Lots of typos, but who cares when the tale is so good and so hot! I've been the happy hubby many times, but rarely the 3rd party male, so it's good to read it from that perspective for a change. And I've sucked the occasional cock in a threesome, but never been fucked while fucking, so that's fun to read as well. Thanks for a consistent hardon during the reading!

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