All Comments on 'My First Lover'

It took a lot to keep reading because of the horrible syntax, but the drinking of the urine (piss to you) killed it for me. Drink a glass of chlorine bleach, which according to one sick American political leader will clear you of all that ails you.

Better english and less bs?

Dude, This story has so many mistakes about female anatomy that there is no chance in hell you are a female, kinda lame!

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u have done pretty good job. keep ur stories cumming.

i gushed while reading this.

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