by knownobounds
Hot story - now all I have to do is get rid of the boner you left me with.
Great to hear a woman's side of this. The man's side usually leaves me wondering if it really happened and I usually loose interest within the first few paragraphs! Great Job, more like this, I loved it!
well written! especially loved that it was written from a womans p.o.v.
I loved the story, but the ending (the leaving, not the climaxes) just seemed SO sudden. Perhaps another chapter?