All Comments on 'My Friend's Mother'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Ssssteamy

hot steamy

kingswedekingswedealmost 10 years ago
MORE

Need chapters Two and MORE !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
keep it up :)

HI THERE , nice work a little on the short side but well done ,look to see the next part hope it is soon .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This is really hot. Craving for more! I wanna cum while reading the next chapter ;)

treborvatreborvaalmost 10 years ago
Nice!

Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Needs forestory, just like foreplay.

If you are going to a story like this, lead up to it a bit. Have some backstory. Have the mom tease a bit, flirting, "accidental" flash, etc. This story should have been the last chapter of many. Anticipation is key.

gotranegotranealmost 10 years ago
Good Start!

You've made a decent effort at a good story, but a great sequel will more than make up for the gaps in the first chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Excellent start, finish her off!

Don't stop now! You're just getting started. Take her the way she wants it!

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