by nameofthewind
Where was that information in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story? I HATE shit like this. So, unread, I scrolled to the end and rating this a 1.
Yes! Hot and definitely hit a nerve. Very much looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully a lot more.
The prose has a pretty unique style, a tad off mainstream, which is good. However, it may benefit with one more 3rd party proof read and edit.
Cheers! And Thank You!
so refreshing to read these kind of stories really nailed it, so tired of "cheating sluts" being punished its old news, and most of the similar stories the lead is a sad sack whens part two....more descriptions of hannah and yourself?? awesome stuff
regards
hottie waiting in anticipation x
This is one of the best story's on the site. Please keep it going! Can't wait!
I love the way that you are building this up slowly and still keeping it erotic. Hope to see more in the future.
It's easy to dump a cheating slut girlfriend BEFORE she becomes a cheating slut wife! You've lost nothing. Don't call her. Don't open the door to let her in. Problem solved. All done.