All Comments on 'My Girlfriend Knows'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
re: Chapter 1

Where was that information in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story? I HATE shit like this. So, unread, I scrolled to the end and rating this a 1.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

good story hope you continue on with it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great start

Yes! Hot and definitely hit a nerve. Very much looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully a lot more.

The prose has a pretty unique style, a tad off mainstream, which is good. However, it may benefit with one more 3rd party proof read and edit.

Cheers! And Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
yes!

so refreshing to read these kind of stories really nailed it, so tired of "cheating sluts" being punished its old news, and most of the similar stories the lead is a sad sack whens part two....more descriptions of hannah and yourself?? awesome stuff

regards

hottie waiting in anticipation x

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing story

This is one of the best story's on the site. Please keep it going! Can't wait!

indysubmaleindysubmaleover 10 years ago
Keep it coming

I love the way that you are building this up slowly and still keeping it erotic. Hope to see more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great news!

It's easy to dump a cheating slut girlfriend BEFORE she becomes a cheating slut wife! You've lost nothing. Don't call her. Don't open the door to let her in. Problem solved. All done.

ruuddogruuddogover 9 years ago
Great Story

Hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please!

But somehow I fear this will never continue...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Ha! Great ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Really Sexy Any more what happens next

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