All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Rival Ch. 02'

that was amazing i want more more more! i was so wet.... and wow i wish i had a monica in my life... i've always had girl fantasies like this!

<3 sarah

***HOT*** So hot... I'm so wet and hot right now... I think I'm going to go and wake up my bf and have some ***Sudders with anticipation*** fun...

-- Wet-N-Wild

My goodness, you had me wet the ENTIRE time. I've been fantasising lately about being with a woman, and this story just described it so perfectly.

You had me riding on my seat, I spent the whole time imagining I was Jennifer. Gee, Monica is such a naughty minx!

i need more....

en extase you are by far and a way my favourite author on this site. Keep it coming! Just chuck in your day job and write more, ok? Is that too much to ask?

I liked where it's going, but I didn't really care for the change in POV, although I can understand why you did it. Maybe the next one will be back to his POV?

Such a deceitful bitch, our Monica.

Your have wonderfully aroused us!

plz plz add another chapter! i thought the 1st chapter was sooooo good, but this one is even better!

This story just heated up dramatically! Wow.. I liked the first chapter but this chapter had me speechless the whole time, fantastic job on writing this. So does he get to stay and watch? She's definately not in the position to kick him out now, is she? Please continue.....