by Lezbiana
i can't wait for more..next chapter please..this story got me wanting more..more of Jessica and Desari..more love of them..thank you for this story..
Very good plot for this story ...Now please don't make us wait to long again.
Very good story. Makes me wanna read more on Jessi and Desari. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Good work ! Bravo !
I'm really enjoying this series, please write a third chapter if you can!
hi there...
i see you used some of the original comments to refine your style, and what i love is that you've done so without losing any of the intensity that just grips the reader throughout.
more, please, babygirl :)