by Lezbiana
hi there...
i see you used some of the original comments to refine your style, and what i love is that you've done so without losing any of the intensity that just grips the reader throughout.
more, please, babygirl :)
I'm really enjoying this series, please write a third chapter if you can!
Very good story. Makes me wanna read more on Jessi and Desari. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Good work ! Bravo !
Very good plot for this story ...Now please don't make us wait to long again.
i can't wait for more..next chapter please..this story got me wanting more..more of Jessica and Desari..more love of them..thank you for this story..