All Comments on 'My Guilty Pleasure'

by Bella_H

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Just another cheating slut

In the story, the narrator thinks, "There were people in my past that loved sex, yet just were in it for their own pleasure," yet that is the way she lives her life. Why waste the energy feeling guilty, since you're going to do it anyway? Regret is only if you get caught.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
i agree vth the 1st comment

another slut..lots of men and women let their desires get better of them...well even that is an understatement....actually the female deserves none of em...the guy she is vth shud dump her and the other guy can use her...the guy she is vth can also use her but seems like he has better thgs 2 do...lol..anyways even the story wasnt narrated well...the sex descritption was losin the continuity..and there was absolutely no seduction

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Can't have both

She needs to make a choice, or she will be found out and lose love, and lust will eventually lose interest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
no remorse/guilty, if you're determined to do it

agreed with first poster; why feel "guilty" if you've done it before, with different people, and are doing it now, and will do it in the future?

"guilt" and "remorse" and other emotions, if they are to have true/deep emotional impact (on you and on readers), are for people whose genitals, during some stupid/impulsive moments, take over for their brains (& started having sex with ex, co-workers, or strangers), with a loving spouse at home who are truly nurturing,,,

otherwise, they are just cheap excuses for acts you're going to do anyway, no matter if it hurts those you love; if so, attempts at explaining guilt, remorse, or other moral things are hallow/silly rationales for cheap thrills you've already done and which you will continue to do,,,

mannydcampmannydcampalmost 20 years ago
very good

So well written!!!!

Dont get down about comments from the kill the cheating wife crowd.

You captured in the last portion an emotional conflict that quite a few people that cheat feel whether they are men or women. Its hard and very realistc.

Great work

Jackie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Excellent

Very well written. Looking forward reading more...

mercurialmercurialalmost 20 years ago
What are we judging here?

Look: this is a story. This is fiction. And earlier critics who judged and condemned and moralized over the woman's actions have missed the point. (In my opinion, they're reading an erotic literature web site way too seriously -- or else they haven't seen some of the other stories that go on here.) Our nameless woman is flawed, sure, but she's also emotional, sexy, conflicted, complex, and human. She's real. And the erotic, well-written zone she currently occupies succeeds as a really interesting story.

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