by Julie20
As rape fantasies go, this was very erotic. I guess the one thing that bothers Me is "teenaged girls". I'm sure all women have those fantasies as probably do all teenaged girls but I guess I would take issue with the rape of a young girl. I am not taking away from your writing. I suppose you must have done a great job because I want to kill Terry Myself. I know, I know...it's fiction and she might have wanted it at some unconscious level and even partly enjoyed it. But still.... not a young girl. I suppose I'm making Myself sound evil by suggested it is okay if she isn't a teenager. I just think the same effect could be achieved with a young woman of legal age. The humiliation, pain, degradation, lust, sex... it can be very erotic but an older Man forcing a teenager.... NO. A well told story with red flags, in My opinion.
4 stars.
ok as to what the other comment said, not all women have these fantasies. i decided not to read this all once i saw where it was going, and i want you to know that i found this in the femdom category.
obviously this isnt femdom, and so i didnt like it.
so fucking hot, Julie you rock!
(I can just IMAGINE youre hot sweaty naked body posing on that white sheet, SMILE!)