by Julie20
so fucking hot, Julie you rock!
(I can just IMAGINE youre hot sweaty naked body posing on that white sheet, SMILE!)
ok as to what the other comment said, not all women have these fantasies. i decided not to read this all once i saw where it was going, and i want you to know that i found this in the femdom category.
obviously this isnt femdom, and so i didnt like it.
As rape fantasies go, this was very erotic. I guess the one thing that bothers Me is "teenaged girls". I'm sure all women have those fantasies as probably do all teenaged girls but I guess I would take issue with the rape of a young girl. I am not taking away from your writing. I suppose you must have done a great job because I want to kill Terry Myself. I know, I know...it's fiction and she might have wanted it at some unconscious level and even partly enjoyed it. But still.... not a young girl. I suppose I'm making Myself sound evil by suggested it is okay if she isn't a teenager. I just think the same effect could be achieved with a young woman of legal age. The humiliation, pain, degradation, lust, sex... it can be very erotic but an older Man forcing a teenager.... NO. A well told story with red flags, in My opinion.
4 stars.