by luvtoread_660
A little longer than the others but very steamy at the end, with the father listening to the daughter's very hot phone sex conversation...wow! Nice writing style as well!
Took a while to get going but lots of nice teasing leading up to the sexy ending. I'd like to see both Mom and Dad give Lynette what she deserves...
I can't believe I never read your stories before! What makes matters worst is that now I have to wait for more chapters! Oh, the pain of not being able to see the final product will terrorize my thoughts! Wonderful story with limitless possibilities! I can't wait to read more!
I very much enjoyed reading the story of Lynnette and her family "problems" I sure hope you planning on continuing with furhter stories about her. Keep up the good work.
I've been readin on this site as long as I can remember, and this has to be one of the two best stories I've ever seen (the other is from Rob in AZ), but this has great heat, good build-up, nice long plataues, and good dialogue (a must). PLEASE don't let this end hanging!
Thx lots, V114
I liked the tension and reveled in the total "wrongness" of it. Fantastic but I want More! More I tell you, make me see the wife in her passion sucking the clit of her daughter whil the dad does Terri Dogggy!
wow, I don't usually go for this kind of fantasy but this was fantastic. Are you going to write any more?
Loved it. Sexily atmospheric, and pretty realisitic, just disappointed when I had read chapter 6 and found it was the end. Please write some more
Please Please write some more don't leave us hanging like that.PLEASE