by luvtoread_660
Please Please write some more don't leave us hanging like that.PLEASE
Loved it. Sexily atmospheric, and pretty realisitic, just disappointed when I had read chapter 6 and found it was the end. Please write some more
wow, I don't usually go for this kind of fantasy but this was fantastic. Are you going to write any more?
I liked the tension and reveled in the total "wrongness" of it. Fantastic but I want More! More I tell you, make me see the wife in her passion sucking the clit of her daughter whil the dad does Terri Dogggy!
I've been readin on this site as long as I can remember, and this has to be one of the two best stories I've ever seen (the other is from Rob in AZ), but this has great heat, good build-up, nice long plataues, and good dialogue (a must). PLEASE don't let this end hanging!
Thx lots, V114
I very much enjoyed reading the story of Lynnette and her family "problems" I sure hope you planning on continuing with furhter stories about her. Keep up the good work.
I can't believe I never read your stories before! What makes matters worst is that now I have to wait for more chapters! Oh, the pain of not being able to see the final product will terrorize my thoughts! Wonderful story with limitless possibilities! I can't wait to read more!
Took a while to get going but lots of nice teasing leading up to the sexy ending. I'd like to see both Mom and Dad give Lynette what she deserves...
A little longer than the others but very steamy at the end, with the father listening to the daughter's very hot phone sex conversation...wow! Nice writing style as well!