All Comments on 'My Husband's Business Partner Ch. 02'

by yekollu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
BAD STORY

bad bad spelling, (read not red) Spell check does not work well for stupid people...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A few glitches, but a good story overall

For being the author's first story, (two chapters) was a big undertaking for even a seasoned author. I think that the more you write the better you will become. Thanks for the good story.......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
yes it is wonderfull

yes we are asking for it. go a head.

you can write good. dont care about negative comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
prison

what prison are you in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nope

Nope Nope Nope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Marvellous and exotic

What a nice fellow!! Sarath is marvellous..

I am sure that Sarath will satisfy all her requirements in future.

What about Ritesh? will he get another chance to fuck his wife?

there seems to be some spelling mistakes, but it is not important as the story doesn't draw the attention of readers in to spellings and grammer since it is so thrilling, believe me I did MB 6 times after reading this story.

Congrats

Yekollu

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Superb .........!!!

Plz write more.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome ...!!

Keep It Up ....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
best story

very well written

del_devildel_devilover 8 years ago

please post more about these two couple

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