All Comments on 'My Initiation'

My crossdressin’ days are over so I love indulging in these kinds of fantasies, plus they tap into some memories I have of being feminized and ultimately fucked.

Unfortunately, my own Michelle was nowhere near as hot as the one in your fantasy so thanks for this re-boot!

As a lifelong CD I love it.

Such a beautiful romance.

Great story I would have like to Steve to have got a female name. This is the third time I have read it and will probably read it again

A wonderful story! To think it's been over 16 yrs now since this was written... the word "transgender" was not in use by any girl I knew back then, and legal marriage was seen as a damn near impossible dream. It's good to know we have made so much progress as a community, and would love other girls to see from these 2 stories how, and why, crossdressers are our sisters too. As a Trans Female it's Soo awesome to read happy ending stories that have withstood the test of time. Especially both of these that have a T4T flair you almost never see in erotic literature. Amazing work both then and still in 2022!

Very touching. Find what suits you and go with it.

LOVED this! A different take, and you did it perfectly!

This is the best TG story I've read. I love the way their friendship gradually develops into love.

This was wonderful and heartfelt and wholesomely erotic! I felt for them and wish them the best happiness!

Lovely story! It is something I have dreamed about since my late teens...I'm now 73. Thank you so much for putting it in words.

A very good story well put together I wish I was one of the girls very well done.

beautiful story very well written. i had to read it all in one go. thank you for handling a sensitive subject so well.

This is one of the very best love stories. They fall in love by chance and find a way to live a life filled with love. Well done.

Fantastic read, we loved it.

Not just another gay porn story. This one was about the nice side of life - with some sexy things at the end.

It is a love story and the adaptation to a new lifestyle.

It comes across as a true story.

The only inconsistency is where he has removed all body hair, but later on she has swallowed him so that her nose is tickling his pubic hair!!

I never though in a million years i would find my self full dressed as a women head to toe.On my knees sucking a strange mans big cock.Let alone swallowing his load of cum.But here i am taking cock after cock deep down my throat swallowing load after load of their cum.Now for the big test there is a cock about to enter my ass.It hurt but after a while and by the second one pure joy.I know you my think i am nuts but i love it.I now know i am a full on sissy cock whore.I love sucking cock as much love getting fucked.

This is one of my favorite stories. It is so filled wit love and respect it is difficult to not like it.

I truly liked the way your story flowed, no rushing through it.

And how they waited for quite awhile before them having sex together...

Lovely, just lovely...

Please continue!

Great story, loved development of characters, detail .

Lovely unhurried buildup as the characters developed their relationship, navigating the fears and self doubts before finding themselves .... in each other

Such a wonderful love story. Reminds me of my now ten year marriage to the love of my life. She was the cross dresser, we dated. I started to crossdress as well. I used to be quite the "alpha male." I thought there would be no way I would do anything like this. Then I met Kyle, she is the best thing that ever happened to me. I love my life as a woman. Life is so wonderful!

Nice story, well written, couple of typos but they didn't spoil things. As usual though, I wish that the assumption that all male CDs are gay could be overcome. Not that there's anything wrong with the gay content but it would make a refreshing change to accurately reflect the fact that approximately 85% of crossdressers are heterosexual.

Regards,

how about chapter 2 ?

Great story about 2 "people" who just connect. Nice they worked through the sexuality without losing the relationship. Shows how sexuality can adapt to the situation.

So sweet and tender. Thank you for taking the time to describe the formation of a full relationship. Very well done.

Love every word of the story, wish I was in it. Put lots of my thoughts and ideas where it should be, I do undertsand more of myself now. Gender or style is not important, what makes me comfortable is...so just went to the mall for some elegant lingerie beacause I had to. I know this will be a change for me...So happy I read the story. Thank you!

I loved this... I found myself routing for both girls. Well done.

I'm not sure how many times I've read this story. I think it is the most beautiful story here--and every time that I read it, I wish that I could have lived such a life. Thank you for such amazing writing. I'm way past my prime now, but every time I read this I think of how great it could have been. So sweet, and, as we progress into the future, so possible for those of future generations who fit much better into this story than into the one that people want to push them into!

This story is so great, I've lost track of how many times I've reread it! Please keep writing!

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I've read quite a lot of TG fiction and I think this is the best I've ever read. As for the ending I think you ended it at exactly the right point.

But I do have a nagging doubt about the GRS. It seemed to me that the point of the tale was their gradual, growing acceptance of each others' bodies and nature. The sudden desire to change those bodies did jar a little, so I felt "Where did that come from?". Many of us would love a relationship like that, but have no desire for surgery.

But that quibble aside it's a charming story of gentle, feminine erotic love.

Love, Rosemary Flowers

Very beautiful and lovely story, The Way It Was Written was done with class & sensitivity to our beautiful characters. And as our story line moves forward and the girls and feelings grow from each other shows the tenderness that they feel and yearn for.

Their love making was communicated to us done in tenderness and loved in a very refreshing way as opposed to the a way many (believe me I enjoy them also) are written.

Most intriguing was the way this beautiful young lady was introduced to us and also the way our other feminine Beauty was introduced into her initiation, and the way she looks just doing first pair of panties other sexy lingerie can articles of women the attire.

I lovef it, so beautiful .. I think they should have come out at work .. tell management and see if they could remain as women .. it worked out bettet anyway .. I would love my own business and and am trying to start up ..

One of the best i have ever read. I give it 10 stars.

Absolutely believable and well written.

I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Thank you for sharing your stories. I love them and was captivated and could imagine myself as either of the girls. I cannot wait to see more from you. The stories are easy to follow and except for some minor grammar issues I loved them!!!

Toni

Sensitive and artfully written with such emotion and depth of feeling. This story really sucked me in, no pun intended LOL (belly laugh out loud). If only the world would allow individuals to live and let live as they chose, and not be so damned judgmental, this reality could be such a beautiful thing for those who chose it. To love who and how we chose...what a concept. Wonderful story...a masterpiece.

I love to dress up and was passable when I was younger, not so much now that I am older but I do not go out locally anyway. I used to attend the "Be All" convention that I think is now just held in Chicago now in June of each year. It used to move to different cities when I was going back in the 1990-1999 area. I miss the wonderful people that did all the hard work to put them on. My very first try to go down to the convention room took several attempts as I was so afraid. So glad I managed to do it as everyone was so nice. I also hope that you continue this story so we can follow the two of you on your history. da.cd@frontier.com

Excellent story very well written so erotic

Mine happened when I was 17.... my aunt ( bless her ) had arranged for me to have piano lessons with our music master from grammar school ( Ken )... He was also the musical director of the local 'am- dram ' society

The first few weeks were predictably boring, playing scales etc and learning to read and write music....he always stood very close by my shoulder at the piano and was very patient ( he had to be!!!...I wasn't a natural )

On the 4th Sunday he gave me some different music to try and play, saying it was for the upcoming Xmas show they were doing ( Peter Pan ).. as I grappled with it, he asked if I would join the group .... I thought about it then agreed...he said I would make a perfect Peter, being small and slim ( a bit girlish really ) and disappeared upstairs ,returning a few minutes later with some costumes over his arm

I finished my playing and he said I should try on the costume, so I did in the hallway ( it was far too big )... Then he said why not try on the Tinkerbelle costume....I was a bit reticent , but he persuaded me....I went into the hallway again and took off my pants and underwear etc and pulled on the white tights, before stepping into the tutu...the effect was incredible...the feel of the tights on my bare skin was electric and I was getting an erection...trying to hide it I went back in to the room where Ken was standing by the piano

' oh yes ...much better ' he said walking towards me , then kneeling down he 'straightened my seams' ....his hand accidentally brushing my 'bulge'

all he said was ' my my ..you like these tights don't you '

I couldn't speak ( mouth too dry ) as I felt his hands wandering all over me....my cock was rock hard to his touch , then he stood up and pulled me close to him and I felt his hard cock prod my stomach ( he was a bit taller than me )

He then stood beside me, his hand gripping my cock and asked if I liked what he was doing....I nodded yes and felt powerless as he slowly undressed me before laying me back on the couch, my aching cock sticking straight up...kneeling on the couch, he bent over and licked the head ( I came so hard it was all over his face )

This is the best story I have seen on this site. It was written really well and the plot was so real life

beautifully written, sensitive and felt real. Fairy tales can be the life we wish to have. and the lucky few get to have it, xx

I read this lovely story because it brought back my own feelings when I was 29, I had dabbled with bisexuality since I was a teenager....at 22 I got married to a wonderful sexy woman who knew nothing about my past 'leanings'....having also worn lingerie for men ( usually older ) I started dressing again ...at first with Lynn's , then gradually I built up quite a collection of my own...it came to an abrupt stop when Lynn caught me in front of the computer dressed in stockings,bra and panties being watched by a few men online as I stroked my cock for them ( she exploded calling me all sorts of names...and to be truthful,she was right )

From that time on, our marriage declined ...then she met a REAL man ( as she put it )... Divorce followed soon after and she left the area when he got a job in the south of the country....then I met Dave( online of course )

Dave too was divorced , same as me ,he was caught dressed but sadly 'outed' by his wife ( mine didn't ...bless her )

He had moved North after his divorce and was seeking like minded friends

That is a great story erotic but smooth well done

Just the best love story, well written. Thank you.

This is one of those stories I come back to again and again. It gets me hard throughout and keeps me hard and dripping. It is the relationship I wish I had!

A wonderful opening, a sweet and sex middle. ...and a happy ending that, honestly, earned a couple of tears💋

Great story well written. Have had similar fantasy and love to read this one over and over. Makes me cum!

Such a fantastic story, very erotic I am so jelous of those girls

What a beautiful story.

That story is so well written and so very hot with raw emotion. My pussy is so wet reading the story. Can;t wait to read more of your stories xoxo

I love the story please keep it going.

would love the same.xx

I felt a real connection to the characters. Thought I would cum when they first made love. well done

You address so many fears and desires in this one short story it's amazing. Well done.

Finally a story without bondage or violence, just dressing and love. My compliments.

I really really enjoyed this story it got me so aroused as this would be a dream come true for me

Probably the best story I have ever read on Literotica. Came twice reading it. YUMMY!!

needs more chapters to where they both get the srs done

This is the first story I have read on Literotica and if they are all this good I will be delighted

This is a well written erotic story

It's been several months but it is the 3rd time I've read this story. Enjoyed it each time!

One of the best I have ever read, I wish I could be so lucky to find the love the found

This is the best story and I think it is marvelous, erotic, sexy and a great love story. It would be something any true gurl would want to happen to her. I just loved the story line and characters described along with the details of each event. I am glad this took a time to develop as this added to the excitement of waiting for "So what happens next." If anyone has put on female clothes and lingerie you would know the wonderful feeling and excitement of that experience, something you never want to end. I too am sorry this author has not written more on this story as I would love to hear what happen next. Looking forward to running into my Michelle or Steve for that matter.

I really loved the writing, especially the very good descriptions of how dressing in lingerie, and other women's wear felt. So very well done. I would like to meet a Michelle!

To this day, this is my favourite story on all Literotica! :)

I'd wish there was more, but I think this story is perfect as it is.

<3

...Is its from 2006 and no additional chapters written! Thats horrible and almost makes me want to cry that this author has stopped writing such beautiful stories as this one. That there's yet another anon comment as stupid as the "that was ugly" one doesn't surprise me. Over the past couple weeks, someone has been leaving little nasty comments that make no sense on many of the more romantic author's stories, and I'm pretty sure they have made attempts to pull down the ratings of these stories by logging in under several dozen faked IDs and scoring the title low (a 1 for instance), and if they keep it up, they will be caught.

Why in the WORLD would someone choose to label this story as ugly? Momma once said, and so have a bunch of other people, "If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all!"

The person that called this story "ugly" should take a page from momma's book and keep silent.

A few hiccups, and I have to admit a few times where I skipped over the descriptive parts, but otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. When I began reading, I really thought that the guy taking Michelle out would be the guy to her girl and was surprised when she dressed him up. Even more surprised when he segued so smoothly into she.

All in all, I like the story, like the writing, and like the ending. Please ... disregard the "ugly" comment. I do believe that everyone has the right to express themselves, but without some sort of constructive criticism ... "Well that was ugly," is just ... well ... ugly.

And the "true" tag just made it worse.

A true love story. They didn't care what they were. Just loved each other!. Very well written, good detail and I enjoyed it very much. Even a little jealous!

Absolutely the BEST story that I have read here on Lit. Talk about transformation! Questioning a lot of my feelings after reading this, wondering what I may have missed in my 61 years. Absolutely great story!

I dissolve into a story so well written that one sees ones self as the character. The descriptions, feelings,not words.

Thank you for the memory. Now to seek!

Finally, a story that is positive and endearing. I'm so tired of the power plays and domination that seems to proliferate here and connected to transformation. It doesn't always have to be something forced or coerced and you've offered an great example of a loving relationship well worth multiple reads. Nicely done.

Your other story "A Flash of Lace" is equally well done and positive.

Slowly and carefully developed,with a logical ending. Brits can do some of this fantasy stuff in a way we Americanos cannot. A logical and endearing progression of the plot.

Very sweet story! Wonderful ending!

Beautiful, excellent, hot, sexy, turn on story! Awesome. Unique. Congrats!

This is truely a beautiful story of two people falling in love, that it has to do with 2 TVs is amazing, yet its written in a way that allows you to come along for the ride, without losing any sense of reality. PLEASE continue this story, I'm sure we would all love to read more of these two people, and thank you for writing such a beautiful story for us all to read!

A lovely sexy story

A good read

Whoever wrote this is a professional writer - or at least, has written a great deal in one genre or another. And as a fellow Englishman and still learning the joys of cross dressing and bi-sexuality, I applaud him or her. Well done! X

Initiation, training and submission! You pulled all of us in with soothing, hypnotic thoughts and words only to leave us with emptiness - still waiting to hear more. You realize you've created a following out here seeking this new universe that only exists in shadows, people hiding to protect their private pleasure cultures. Stories like this give perfect meaning to the phrase "out of the closet". Your crafty creations here will live on in the minds of your readers.

"Very good," says another humble servant.

I felt drawn into this story. I wanted to be the one shown her transexual side. I envy their ability to be their selves the rest of their lives. I want to see more on their progression. I hope these characters begin hormones and share their long transition on hormones with us. I want to learn and cum from their breast and other developements.

Interesting...just enough sex to know it's in the right category but it's covered by the gentle transformation of the storyteller, without the gaudy appearance of most of the stories of a similar vein that I've read here. You did well, convincing me that this was a transition that could happen in real life, were the money for the extensive wardrobe changes really available...but it's just an example of fantasy fiction, correct? (And speaking of "correct," there were several spelling errors that the English Major in me caught--you'd do well to have a fine piece of literature like this gone through by an editor; I imagine the powers that be here could offer you that service.)

This story was very well written kept me going from one page to the next. Keep it up.

this is the best piece of writing i have viewed on this site , i loved every word the descriptions of the lingerie were exquisite just wished that I could have been there it seemed so real

brilliant!!! at last a story that isn't all about the sordid side of sex!

a story with a real sense of love, life and the underlying lust that's in all our minds

You are an amazing writer! The sensitivity, the timing, the elegance of the story, are wonderful, so rarely seen on these websites. You must be a writer in real life as well? Or one who has read a great deal or been very well educated? What I liked most about the story was the way you showed Michelle's femininity without excessive laundry lists of clothing and makeup. You were never heavy handed, always delicate with the narration, and the dialogue was sweet and feminine. I had no trouble with the ending, but I understand why some were put off. Those who don't write a lot can't understand how difficult endings are, when you're tired of a story and want to move on! I saw your ending as that: A quick and sensible closing summary, like "and they lived happily ever after." Most of the interest and joy had already been given your readers in the earlier chapters, so why hang around when you can move to a new story? PLEASE DO SO? PLEASE WRITE MORE!

As a straight practising heterosexual (if I practice enough, I might get it right), I found this story wonderful. It was well eritten and described a beautiful transformation. The sex was low key but compelling, and highlights what I strongly believe - if a story is well written, the content doesn't matter nearly so much. A favorite for me and worth more than 5 votes if that were possible.

Being a muslim living in a very orthodox conservative society, I can just dream. But if I can, I will live like a woman openly like these guys, find a husband for myself. Currently I just dress myself secretly.

This story gets me hard and horny every time I read it!!! I am still in the closet but want my first experience to be like this!!!

this is one of the finest stories ever

i was 15 the first time i tried on girl's clothes. I loved it and had a terrific orgasm from just wearing a girdle, nylons, and silky pink panties - without even playing with my "thingy"!! i'm in my 60s now, too, and wish i'd lived a life like this story describes!!

loved it, excellent pace to the story and very hot!!

Great story I am in my 60s and have been dressing since my teens. I wish I could live the lifestyle all the time

Great story. I would've like it more if Michelle would've been much bigger so I could've read about Steve crying and moaning as he took every inch in his virgin hole.

Hi

I am a mature bisexual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much. I would love to have a crossdresser for a roommate and lover.

Sincerely,

Josie of Augusta, Georgia

hot hot hot! although the end was jarring, like others said, and kind of a let-down after such a fantastic story.

Well paced, well written and very hot!

i wish i was michelle

You realy cought my thoughts about wearing female clothing and how i would love to progress.

Its a shame that it is just in my head and not possable but i would like to read more.

i hope to read more about yinz gals

This story was well written and very enjoyable, one of the best I have read. I would agree with others that the final remarks about presumably surgical changes (to one or both of them?) was probably not needed. Also there were a few typos which slipped through (and I know how difficult it can be to pick them up in your own work).

Beautiful and sexy and loving!

Being a man, just as i would like to come out if only that were possible

I really liked this story. Really well written, no spitefullness, wonderful.