All Comments on 'My Kyle Ch. 02'

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hotspice014hotspice014about 14 years ago

thanks alot for the second part, i loved it. Especially loved when Dean got jealous. =]. can't wait for more of your stories.!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
So Cute:)

I was really excited to see you had something new up. Yay! looking forward to the next story already...

unlivelyunlivelyabout 14 years ago
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contrived drama. boring. Need *more* to the story if this shit is to mean anything. Length. Let it build.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Very weak plot in both Ch's. There is not much of a challange. Usually you do better, but erotic part is fine.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

i think you should write more. very good story

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

no comments. i dont mind the sex but this is a little tame.? xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
DINKYBOOTS SUCKS

Please stop your comments, neither wanted nor warranted

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

i dunno, that temper that showed would worry me. Jealousy can do things to people!

Scoobydoo2014Scoobydoo2014about 9 years ago
Loved it

Absolutely loved it, love all your stories, you have a real talent and I am a sucker for a happy ever after. Wish you had kept writing some more stories, any chance, please..?🙏🙏🙏

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