by DreamerOne
thanks alot for the second part, i loved it. Especially loved when Dean got jealous. =]. can't wait for more of your stories.!
I was really excited to see you had something new up. Yay! looking forward to the next story already...
contrived drama. boring. Need *more* to the story if this shit is to mean anything. Length. Let it build.
Very weak plot in both Ch's. There is not much of a challange. Usually you do better, but erotic part is fine.
i dunno, that temper that showed would worry me. Jealousy can do things to people!
Absolutely loved it, love all your stories, you have a real talent and I am a sucker for a happy ever after. Wish you had kept writing some more stories, any chance, please..?🙏🙏🙏