by katharine32
I love the character, does she have a name..kind of reminds me of someone....
I really enjoyed reading your story. Will there be a part 2?
murr777@storm.ca
Good Try, my feelings just like those drivers.
Please forward your continuation story soonest.
Very interesting first effort, of course you must keep writing. I'd like to see more character development, maybe not detailed description, since the reader can visualize whatever lovely creature he wishes. But perhaps some history, some deeper thoughts? That could be developed within some dialog with the truckers. Of course, this IS a fictional character...and not an autobiography? *S*
This story makes me want to take up truckdriving...
Katharine, you have a wonderful day and take care!
This story is the perfect blend just enough sensuous showing off---got me to full mast---
Can't wait for chapter 2!