by BikerRob
This is just another unrealistic story. I like the part where you said that she was fucking this big black guy with a 10" cock, now thats original.
If there is husbands revenge coming I would like to see it.
And hopefully he gets rid of the slut and finds a wife.
While you're at it. Do something about Andrew. Stick a .45 up his ass or something similar.
there should be an option for a zero vote.
really enjoyed reading it, hope there is more.
Thanks for taking time to write it.
Great installment of revealed confessions and established conditions.
i enjoyed the story except for a couple things, that writers put in their story hoping to juice it up. lol. the first one is andrew the black guy witha 10in dick, thats really original NOT. second is the creme pie, thats another thing u could have left out. this guy seemed to have it going on, except for these two things as mentioned
not great, but not bad. You had a pretty good, mostly original story going, as original as this genre can get. However, the introduction of the black cock superman was so cliche that I laughed out loud. It is not that a dominant male added to the story was a bad touch, nor do I care that he was black and had a big cock, but it just did not work. You resorted to one of the top five LW cliches. Too bad.
the author's brain must be like a cesspool. seems like he has a tiny weenie!!
This guy must be a true conaseur of creampie combo. Well if he is real lucky maybe he'll pick up some nice STD with his creamy delight, maybe even a touch of HIV & AIDS. I do not know anyone who would like this kind of shit, and I will make a point of ignoring any more of your stories. R.T.
Anyone who can put a complete story together for me to read (and I did read the story) I liked your work and I apreceate what you did, keep writing.
yes, cuck story and a good one
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
good story and it pissed off the asshole of LIT! So eat shit asshole of LIT I gave it a fucking 5!
good story and it pissed off the asshole of LIT! So eat shit asshole of LIT I gave it a fucking 5!
get an original non gutless idea
There is really some foul stuff deep in LW archives, like this steaming pile is shit.
If any one knows who the author or publisher is I for her name she has several other books but my life as a financial advisor is my favorite
My email is
Mosi061@yahoo.com thank you