by Mustang7773
This has some hot moments if humiliation is your thing. I'm surprised, though, that Lit let a story through with this many grammatical problems. It gets distracting.
This Could have been a great series..... if you did'nt turned the guy into a tottal ASSHOLE.
Hope you can correct this problem in future episodes.
Oh, the sex scenes were hot, and the writing was well done. However the husband's shift into "jerk mode" with his wife was a bit much to take. As a fantasy it may be fun, but most any wife would make his return a very cold affair.
Story so far is great,but bring him back, don't let him become a Shumck. The story can be so much fun if he just enjoy's the situations. I also feel that you need to now expand the story line. Wife, His parents, and any brothers and sisters that are out there.
Jesus, I just shot a huge load in my wife's panties wishing they were her mom's panties.Great story development! How about wife/sucking while m-i-l rimming then sharing the cum?