by tariail
Great descriptive passages and a clever ending.
5 star all the way!!!!
Thanks for the feed back, Bill. I have more. I will try and get more of them on Literotica. Again, thanks for the kind words. -tariail
This is what I call Erotica. Very well written and very erotic.
Well-written and quite erotic! Vivid, yet simple and sexy description of the heat between the two of them and the actions that follow. Love how it isn't full of the typical words used for the body that can sometimes make a piece of writing seem "low." Thank you!
It that a true story? I know a Dean, sounds just like him. Does he live in Georgia?