All Comments on 'My Mistress Ch. 01'

by jamesonly4u

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
one language at a time

Please keep all of the story in one language so that we can decide whether to read it or not at the beginning, not the middle.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Aren't you supposed to be providing lousy tech support somewhere?

And piss? Isn't that supposed to be in the twisted fetish category?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Language Problem

Theconcept of the story ws great ,but, switching languages is like getting up to answer the door in the middle of sex. Keep to one language.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hindi,Punjabi,Gujertai or Urdu

The dialog is in what language.Anyway there is a gun pointing at Sanjay's head.

In India the Army have their own way of watching over the spouse.Sanjay is at a 95% chance of being blown off like Sanjay Gandhi.

marquisdesade98marquisdesade98almost 3 years ago

You would need to provide translations for the Hindi dialogues. But the story is still quite lovely and I'd like to read the next part

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