All Comments on 'My Mom: The legal slut'

damn that was hot as hell................well written , hard to keep my hands off of my cock while reading

More, more, more

hope you can keep up the good,work most fail after a good story like this one. how about mom in sexy panties and teasing

was so hot i shot a load while reasing it thanks

You wrote the word "here" instead of "her." Not to mention several other typos which distracted from the flow of the story. Please get someone to edit your work. You have a lot of potential.

No offense, but this is a pretty lame 1st attempt. At least try and make your story somewhat believable.

Wonder why it is that people that leave non-constructive, insulting comments always do so anonymously? As for the comment from Tasmania about the spelling...is writing in ALL CAPS any better? Practice what you preach.

Now, I would say that there are a few notable errors...but all in all, not bad for a first effort.

Slough off the criticism. Not everybody will enjoy your kind of story. However, I found it original and terrifically erotic. The mother/lawyer/slut is an exciting and dangerous female. Hope you go on with this.

The skeleton of a good story ruined by bad spelling and grammar. This story needs thorough editing, and this can begin using the checker.Literotica has excellent editors, use them.

Please continue the story with more additions like whipping,etc. A high degree erotic story. Keep it up.

The stories good for a first timer it has great potentail cant wait to read more

This story left me wanting to read more. I hope you will continue it at some point.

i'd give anything to fuck my mom like he did.i enjoyed the domination factor,keep up the good work

You wrote a good story. I love the slut mother. Too bad he didn't fuck her ass.

I can read between the lines she needee to loose control

Great writing, some good action and room to continue your work. Keep it up.

I love this story. It's sad that there isn't more too it but i'm sure you will continue with it.

LOVE it

I only had one woman that liked to be hurt, bitten hard, etc. That was the last time I took her to bed. Of course, it was not that, I just moved out of town. Later she became quite depressed and had a suicide attempt, so I heard. Oh, well, sorry about that. Not making a correlation here, just mentioning it.

Please don't submit any more stupid, unbelievably juvenile "stories" like this again, I can hardly type for laughing at how dim-witted this garbage is. Go away

The decision is yours. I don't like rough or dom whatever the situation. The guy is getting the shaft in a way though. The girl likes rough then he gets static when her tastes change. Their parents are his grandparents, so no need to double state it. 6'5" 180# is not typical. All that being said, I think you do have a workable premise.

I jerked off reading this, please there has to be a fucking sequel; but don't share her.

... damn, wish I had been around to tell the author that he is most certainly on the "right track" and he certainly does NOT "need to just hang up [his] pen and paper"

The writer's craft is not the best but that did not bother me in the least.

I STRONGLY BELIEVE that erotic stories MUST BE WRITTEN FROM THE HEART. This writer seems to have vonveyed to us his (or her) erotic fantasies without polishing them: we read them RAW, unrefined.

Erotic stories can be told in Broken English & still be very powerful.

Bottom line: WorldlyJames has successfully presented his incestuous fantasy to his or her readers.

Another!!!

Please write more. Tell us how he uses her cunt for his pleasure

Write a whole series up till the son’s wedding day

Good story. Just needs better editing. The spelling and grammar leave something to be desired.

I quit reading when she said that she was to get with his ex and file rape charges against him. No way, no matter how you try, you can't get erotic after that.