All Comments on 'My Mother's Older Sister'

by exwyz

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toJohnny7toJohnny7about 15 years ago
Most excellent true sounding story . . .

and if it is true, thank you so much for sharing your experiences. It's funny how you never forget some things.

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 15 years ago
Sad, actually

It seems you decided to make the aunt as disgusting as possible and then have his dick respond as if she was as sweet a tart as he could have hoped for. No affection for her, no caring. Why would a reader care for either character in the story, or care what they do? I didn't.

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 15 years ago
Sad, actually

It seems you decided to make the aunt as disgusting as possible and then have his dick respond as if she was as sweet a tart as he could have hoped for. No affection for her, no caring. Why would a reader care for either character in the story, or care what they do? I didn't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Weirdest story I have read on this site

Somehow you made this erotic and repulsive. It took away my horny.

Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
Yuck

Repulsive yet fascinatingly vulgar and gross. Aunt Doreen is the epitome of the pits yet quite real. You have a really off the wall sense of humour. Can remember how the randiness of youth could make one indulge in something ashamedly gross. Today one would rather die a thousand deaths than admit to some of the errors of randiness. Your unnamed birthday boy is not a well puppy. Your descriptions and imagery are actually very good if quite disgusting If you were looking to create a passion killer of a story you did a good job. Well written

MagnificoGiganticusMagnificoGiganticusabout 15 years ago
Nice story of control/intimidation

I think this story is hot. So what if the boy is a little afraid of his aunt? His mind tells him he doesn't want sex with her, but his body DOES. The aunt sees his hornyness and takes advantage of it, manipulates him to both there benefits. This is not the first story of this type to be written, where the protagonist is unsure about why he is turned on by his aunt. All the social conditioning he has had growing up tells him he should be repulsed by her (hence the negative thoughts/opinions in the story) but his body keeps telling him to submit, because she is aggressive, controlling, and has qualities that stimulate him at a basic level (big tits, hips, ass, pussy). He needs to fuck! His body is greedy for it, regardless of what his mind/thoughts are. I think this is an awsome story of not just submitting to his aunt, but to his baser instinct. With his aunt taking control, he becomes truly free to be himself -- to be the horny teenager that needs to suck on tits, and fuck a pussy. And she gives him everything he needs. Nothing disgusting about that!

thebug37thebug37almost 9 years ago
Real thoughts from youth

Guess it could have been worse - glad you didn't have Barbie Doll on your shelf. You seem to have to much direct knowledge of such to not have this as a total reality based story. Did you write from memory - be honest and tell us the truth? Your story had lots to think about when reading your story. Enjoyed your descriptive first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Very cool story. I really identified with the character and wish this happened to me!

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