by PoetMaster
I love this series! The shower scene at the end reminded me of after karate practices. Grrrr
so poetmaster as well as other writers should write to only one audience and not express freedom of speech and thought?.. interesting haha
like the series though and your other shit too though poetmaster
Why the fuck do you writers have to always do this?? It was going so well, why bring the dad into the mix?
I think I will have to look up some more superlatives if this gets much better.
Very erotic but the transition from one sex partner to another could be better.
Owes another great chapter that you wrote about Joey and Shelley. I like how you introduced him to Taylor as they another potential partner. I like how the two parents started seducing each others' child. It hardly wait for the next chapter to see how you develop the characters.