All Comments on 'My New Sis Ch. 04'

Going back and forth between the two couples at the beginning of the chapter was -- as a concept -- good. However, just jumping from scene to scene without any transition -- such as line of nothing but asterisks

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<P>-- was very jarring. Instead of just enjoying the fucking, too much of the time was figuring out who was who.

Poetmaster that was BRILLIANTLY done!! That made me so hot and juicy just reading the story, and I like how you went back and forth between the couples/people! I agree at first because of the similar names that you really had to read it but I think that got me more into it. Wow I've always enjoyed reading but NEVER this much. Keep it coming!!!!! 200%

Poetmaster that was BRILLIANTLY done!! That made me so hot and juicy just reading the story, and I like how you went back and forth between the couples/people! I agree at first because of the similar names that you really had to read it but I think that got me more into it. Wow I've always enjoyed reading but NEVER this much. Keep it coming!!!!! 200%

do them all