All Comments on 'My New Sis Ch. 04'

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Poetmaster that was BRILLIANTLY done!! That made me so hot and juicy just reading the story, and I like how you went back and forth between the couples/people! I agree at first because of the similar names that you really had to read it but I think that got me more into it. Wow I've always enjoyed reading but NEVER this much. Keep it coming!!!!! 200%

Poetmaster that was BRILLIANTLY done!! That made me so hot and juicy just reading the story, and I like how you went back and forth between the couples/people! I agree at first because of the similar names that you really had to read it but I think that got me more into it. Wow I've always enjoyed reading but NEVER this much. Keep it coming!!!!! 200%

Going back and forth between the two couples at the beginning of the chapter was -- as a concept -- good. However, just jumping from scene to scene without any transition -- such as line of nothing but asterisks

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<P>-- was very jarring. Instead of just enjoying the fucking, too much of the time was figuring out who was who.