All Comments on 'My New Sister'

that was hot. let's have some more from these two.

Nice story, but horrible English, so much that it was distracting.

Did you want to shout out in surprise that you were writing erotica, or did you mean "Disclaimer"? Please, buy a dictionary...

DON T BELIEVE IT,the more i read the worst it get STOP WRITING please stop for all the other writer,give them a chance,YOU ARE NOT A WRITER YOU ARE SICK IN YOUR FUCKING HEAD.

How the fuck did this get posted with how horrible the spelling, grammar, and overall writing are?

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Everyone in the comments needs to calm down. There's the occassional typo or grammatical error, but if you're finding it hard to read, it only goes to show your level of reading ability.