by f1dude_lotus
I really enjoyed this one. I'm glad to see you slowed down on referring to her cock as her "little-girl" though. It was okay the first couple of chapters, but got a little old after a bit. Sex scenes were great, and the romance was just as nice. I think it's about time to them to switch up the roles a little and try something new though, if you know what I mean lol
Looking forward to the next chapter. Don't be afraid to throw in some bumps in the road! HS relationships inevitably have issues in college.
...But I suppose you can't please everyone. Personally I looked forward to these chapters because you made the romance so much fun. Glad you're writing again dude... write from your heart... it always leads to the best stories. Cheers! --- Josie
I've really enjoyed this series so far. Hoping to see Chapter 10 soon.