All Comments on 'My Other Single Friend'

But you should have checked on the text a little better... I've seen this before. You've repeated one paragraph - apparently once before and once after editing, so this became a little confusing.

It was a nice little fic, but you should have told WHY the lovely Olivia Wilde suddenly started humping Noah. It might have been more plausible.

Nevertheless I liked the fic and hope to read something more soon.

sexy story, really liked the blowjob parts. very hot and descriptive

NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED,