All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 11'

I am not a sucker for exhibitionism. These group gatherings are usually just drab for me, but the way you orchestrated things from the day prior to the morning of, to the evening was pleasing for me. The punishment aspect of it perhaps it what does it for me. I wouldn't say I'm crazy about "humiliation" either, but the "punishment" definitely comes in to play in your story. In any case, good job, and I look forward to the next chapter. :)