All Comments on 'My Perfect Valentine's Day'

Hello SINserely,

Geeeeeze they have a stop'n Shop out there? Glad the big Bopper knows how to take care of his wife, hope real estate keeps up! I say thats "A good read"

"R your heels safe from the

Shoeslayer"

Hello SINserely,

Geeeeeze they have a stop'n Shop out there? Glad the big Bopper knows how to take care of his wife, hope real estate keeps up! I say thats "A good read"

"R your heels safe from the

Shoeslayer"

Great shopping names. Very creative writing! Still hot after 15 - good for you girlfriend! kr

You definitely need more sex in this or a more detailed description of the sex that happens. I know it's a letter but you can definitely making it more erotic.

However, I'll give you points for originality and balls for writing in the letters category. Keep working at it and good luck with the contest!

This was a good story but as others have said you could have put more sex and passion into it.

For such little effort, I can only award a little score. Was this really the best you could do for a contest?

This was okay, but not really very erotic. It had a few anomalies, too. Wine for breakfast? Good luck in the contest.

This was okay, but not very erotic, and left me wanting more. There were a few anomalies too. Wine at breakfast?

I will print this and leave it on the kitchen table for boyfriend. I will highlight all the things I want. Great ideas!

Not overly erotic but a decent read.

DG

Very Good. I loved it, Babs.

You've been reading way too many fairy tales to the kids.